Light & colorful
Riding current high
I am seen flying in the sky
Proud to be a kite
Control is in hands not mine
How high and how long He decides
Ever thankful for a flight
Prayers are for landing fine
When it is time
--
OSI
Prompt: Kite
9 comments:
Words that definitely soar today.
Beautifully rendered! :)
Run the length of kite!
I take a bow sir!!
This is a masterpiece of philosophy I think. Talking "faith" and "trust" through a kite's perspective? I have no words, Harshadji. Wonderful!!
faith can change a view...so nice!!
Harshadji..I loved the way you concluded.. excellent.. full of wisdom..as ever..thanks for honouring the prompts..
You've captured the magical feeling of flying a kite; who hasn't imagined what it feels like to actually zip up the whistling string and be the kite!
Your words are just so beautiful and full of knowledgeable wisdom ... nice poem Harshad ji :-)
This is the way I feel for sure about kites, Harshad. Wonderfully told.
I love the allegory, the story of life in God's hands. We pray and trust in Him for a nice flight and a happy safe landing.
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a joyful metaphor, rendered with grace
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