Light and colorful
Going higher and
higher
As high as I can
And still further….
Nothing holds me
In my single minded pursuit
…. to reach my highest
No looking back
No holding back
No intentions to return
My let go is complete
Reaching higher
I will disappear,
Clinging not
Hearts looking at me from the ground
Connect with me
Some smile, some sigh!
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OSI Prompt : Balloon
15 comments:
I suspect an excellent metaphor in this.
This is so beautiful...letting go ..flying with the winds.. loved it.. yes, that's how one wants one's spirit to be enjoying total freedom.. Thanks Harshadji.. RS:)
Beautifully written...
Thanks for the creative prompt. I like the idea of "hearts watching from the ground" in your poem.
Beautiful poem! Some smile some sigh! I hope i'm the one who smiles.. cos that means m on the same trail.. the ones who sigh just wish.. the others set to make it come true! :)
I will sigh while I'm smiling. :)
Thank you for the very fun prompt, you did well on its use. Good job!
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magical poem...the image of freedom personified by a balloon...
those running balloons...:) love the drawing!!
Your poetry is always so beautiful and expressive.
Like your art also.
Really a great poem. Also when I see a balloon in the sky I have a bittersweet feeling.
Never looked at a balloon in this light before... very creative!
I am floating up with every verse. Beautiful take on balloon. Thanks for the inspiration.
Wow!...Beautiful poem on Balloon...Great thoughts!
I love your bright and beautiful rendering of this prompt. Such joy, my friend!
A 'let go...' so beautiful.
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