Looking
down
Hiding
passion
Scared
little, more excited
Not
wanting to say no, afraid to say yes
Waiting
for a move
She lifted eyelids slowly
To
find what he holds in his eyes but
Dropped
it quickly
To
hide what she holds in her own,
Heart
beating loud
Color
of her face
Said
it all.
--
OSI Prompt : Crimson Red
12 comments:
a crimson moment captured...
Crimson, that!!! What a blush..lovely.. A beautiful poem, this!!
RS:)
A moment beautifully expressed in words.
very beautifully written.. the picture wasn't needed, the poem painted one while i read.. lovely..!
A wonderful true to life story in just a few choice lines of poetry!
No picture needed, the poem tells the story of passing crimsom thoughts.
Wow....What a beautiful poem!!....Girl/Woman feelings...captured very well :)
Indeed!
conversing with the fire
Days of old here, Harshad. There is much feeling in your poem, I can feel her heart beating and share her blush!
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beautiful poem sir ... very nicely expressed !!
Ah, seduction...! Beautiful.
so sweet..!!
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