Sunday, January 13, 2013

Bare Naked


Bare Naked

On a cool quiet of night
Alone
Rested facing sky wide open
I lie for a while

Calm and vastness
Combined
Play its magic…..
Soon I feel my breath
and
Hear my heartbeats

Slowly
Trivial frills drop
and
Truth revealed
Bare
Naked
--
OSI Prompt : Naked

8 comments:

WritingsForLife said...

I could picture the scene through your words :-)

Amrit Sinha said...

Amazing poetry ...

Geraldine said...

this is very evocative...nice one.

anthonynorth said...

Beautifully done.

J Cosmo Newbery said...

Love the imagery.

totomai said...

what a reflection... drowned in a world :-)

WabiSabi said...

Lovely meditative poem!

Sri Valli said...

Lovely poem, beautiful imagery! :)