Each heartbeat
Each breath
One with the whole
Nothing special has to happen
Nothing else wanted
Each moment,
Linked with another
Yet complete and
Free
Free
To Love
To create
To share
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OSI Prompt : Free
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OSI Prompt : Free
9 comments:
Soft and subtle ... loved the emotions in this piece !!!
This is a beautiful reflection on what it is to be free.
Beautifully said. Thanks for a wonderful prompt this week.
http://mypoeticpath.wordpress.com/2012/10/12/haiku-reflections-breathing-free/
subtle positive words...well said Harshad...:)
Beautiful poem - loved the ending.
That's what I call freedom.
I like your poem, Harshad ~~ Love the heartbeat and the breath counted, each one special, separately. Being free is wonderful but we take it for granted all too often.
Thank you for this nice prompt, it was a fun write.
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Free to love, to create, to share...
And so many feel free to take, take and take..
I liked Harshadji the way you put it.
RS:)
really lovely!
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