A call
As usual,
alone
at regular place for evening walk
It is Twilight of evening
Cool breeze
Golden light
Couples strolling
Friends together talking, laughing, walking….
Birds chirping
I believe it is a call to return
So beautiful, I thought
My hand reaches for mobile
To call you
I want you to hear
Chirping
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OSI Prompt: Absent
16 comments:
The call to come home, the warm welcome. A call we all pine for. Nicely captured.
Life can get lonesome without one's mate.
Your poem reminded me of a song that was popular back when I was young:
The Birdies Sing :
Let's all sing like the birdies sing,
Tweet, tweet tweet, tweet tweet.
Let's all sing like the birdies sing,
Sweet, sweet sweet, sweet sweet.
Let's all warble like nightingales,
Give your throat a treat.
Take you time from the birds,
Now you all know the words,
Tweet, tweet tweet, tweet tweet.
Let's all sing like the birdies sing,
Bubbaboo ba-bubbaboo ba-boo.
Let's all sing like the birdies sing,
Tweet tweet tweet - my that bird sings sweetly.
Let's all warble like nightingales,
Ah, Mimi...c'est magnifique!
Take your time from the birds,
Now you all know the words
Tweet, tweet tweet, tweet tweet
Let's all sing like the birdies sing,
Tweet, tweet tweet, tweet tweet.
Let's all sing like the birdies sing,
Sweet, sweet sweet, sweet sweet.
Let's all warble like nightingales,
Give your throat a treat.
Take your time from the birds,
Now you all know the words,
Tweet, tweet tweet, tweet tweet
..
Ah, the desire to be homeward. great words.
Very beautiful...refreshing... music to the mind ..as you look for more music to your ears..
Thanks Harshaji..
RS:)
Chirps and Tweets. What a world.
Such a sweet poem ... At times like this you really feel like calling that special person :-)
You weave such a beautiful scene with your poem. Nicely done!
What it is to want someone near to share. Beautifully done.
so sweet and tender.
very sweet and loving..
I am here
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nicely done.. thank you
This is so beautiful ... loved it :-)
Ah, know that feeling 'needing the human voice' ~ well penned ~
A Creative Harbor) aka ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^
Lovely to have you 'visit'.
In the moments of twilight, as I reflect on the day. There's a calm silence that comes within these thoughts. Walking hand in hand with the one I love, makes existence seem worth it all in the end. It makes me wish I had never seen or heard of the mobile. Too much noise to blot out the chirping birds. I guess I am a romantic in the end. Thanks for making me think on this a bit. Rob.
So nice to want to share your lovely moment with one your love :))
A VERY BEAUTIFUL AND RESONATING POEM.
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