Sunday, June 24, 2012

GEMS LOST!!


Many a times
Finer point of life seen
In the course of living,
Gets drained with clutters in mind









A gem is lost






When clutters are cleared
Point seen becomes bright as crystal
And
Gets shape into words

--
OSI Prompt : Crystal


8 comments:

Anonymous said...

you made me smile...!!

joanne said...

felt a bit stilted, but I still enjoyed your poem and cartoon....

anthonynorth said...

The mental process nicely explained.

Ramesh Sood said...

Your poems are always crystal clear.. great words, Harshadji..

Amrit Sinha said...

Your last stanza is so true ... we shoudl free our mind of clutters so that we can see the right things in life !!!

The Write Girl said...

Nicely written. It's always amazing when we free our minds.

Pranita said...

It's strange how d same thought looks so strong n obvious which we dint feel earlier, cos of the clutters!
Very well expressed Sir!
Black fist of fury!

Aravind R Sankar said...

That was very true and you have explained the point brilliantly in simple language.
And that captivated me. :)