Border
Crossing the line
Was dreadful
But not crossing was killing her.
She had to.
She did.
Will you hold guilty a cuckoo
For singing her heart out
On a tree
in the hospital compound
With ‘Silence please’ board?
Everyone crosses
You
Me
All
Yet cast stones at others.
HE gave a seamless world.
--
OSI Prompt : Border
14 comments:
Harshad, don't we all dream of crossing that line. I am glad hers was fairly harmless. An excellent read, thank you.
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well done..
A++
What a beautiful poem this...no Cuckoo is not guilty.. loved it..
wow... this is very well done.
thoughtful and nice words!
I like your unique poetry style here. This made me pause and think. Nicely done.
Your last line indicates a truth in which you believe. Well written.
Here is Mine:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/05/02/the-other-side/
Beautiful!
Seamless world ... indeed!
Yes we do cross borders all the time even those set by ourselves. He did create a seamless world and a heart that does walk or crawl, that borders would be able to hold it... the heart flies...
And we also do have to get to the other side of the other kinds of borders too; just to know which side is firmer or is it a mere perception that is building up borders of misunderstanding.
Beautiful write up Harshad sir
Regards
Tender and beautiful. So good. Thank you.
(Your prompt love comes up at OSI this Sunday. Please send me your poem and/or image.)
"HE gave a seamless world.--"
So true...
Borders indeed we create.
Very well written.
Loved this! The image of the cuckoo is beautiful! And yes- we ALL cross those lines and borders don't we?
Wow, you said a lot here and so thoughtfully. Love it.
enjoyed your poetry very much.
keep it up.
welcome share a free verse with us,
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