Sunday, May 8, 2011

LOVE


LOVE

Like a fresh breeze,
Coming without any notice
and stoping without any,
It blossoms on its own.

With love around,
Celebration is on.
Heart gets wings and
Soul is content,
Sunrise and sunsets are more colourful,
Moon more charming
And fragrance in air enchanting.

It is His grace that visits you
No one has control over it.

When in love you trust totally
But love cannot be trusted to be there, always.
So tender……
Efforts to retain it are like holding back
Cool breeze that lift your spirits. 
                *
Lasting are
Marriages
Contracts
Relationships
Understandings……
Right efforts can keep it going
…..With cool breeze refreshing your heart often,
If you are
Open  and  Lucky.
--                                                                                                                            

OSI Prompt : LOVE.

20 comments:

Geraldine said...

A perfect poem Harshad, I really enjoyed this one and the lovely prompt too, thank you!

World So Wide said...

To be open and lucky - two of the secrets of love :)

Well said!

PremI said...

Beautiful...
Love flowing like a cool breeze, in your words.
Truly,Love is His grace...so fresh and effortless.
"When in love you trust totally"
Very well said.
Loved the poem.

Sandra said...

no one has control over it....love that !!

Ramesh Sood said...

Somehow.. the line...right efforts keep it going...left me thinking.. God bless!!!

Jim said...

Lucky in love is a classical theme, Harshad. I like the way you included the elements of our world.

Being open helps for sure. That and the help of God.
..

Anonymous said...

It is beautifully written Harshad and a wonderful prompt for MOther's Day.

SandyCarlson said...

Ah, to be open. To feel that breeze. Than many wonderful things are possible.

Carina said...

Very nice. I like the last stanza especially.

The Poet said...

I found these words to be most touching, "With love around, Celebration is on. Heart gets wings and Soul is content,Sunrise and sunsets are more colourful,Moon more charmingAnd fragrance in air enchanting."

This is what true love can do.

Beautifully written, Harshad.
Thanks for this week's prompt.

(It was nice to see you over at my blog)

Unknown said...

I particularly appreciate the reference to Grace. It enters when we allow, doesn't it? What a blessing.

Jingle said...

blossom on its own?
wow.

well done.
love the way you nail it.

Haven Fairfield said...

Right effort....I like that. Thank you for reminding us that it takes a little effort too!

The Write Girl said...

Beautiful poem...thank you for the inspiration this week. Love is a beautiful concept to write about.

JanePoet~deborah said...

Wonderful thoughts on love ... beautiful.

peace,
jp/deborah

Patti said...

Beautifully written for your prompt!! Thank you!

Tulika Verma said...

Lovely poem! A simple and beautiful prompt! :)

AM said...

wonderful flow of words. glad to have found your blog :)

Saumya said...

it soothed my heart...loved it!!

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