Sunday, October 24, 2010

Looking up

One Single Impression: Grace


Dancing stars
Always inviting to join
To play

Unaware me
Busy in petty games,
Ignore.


His grace and
I look up

…And smile.

-

16 comments:

Reflections said...

Beatiful imagery to a simple phrase... 'His Grace and I look up'

Nice.

Tammie Lee said...

lovely~

Ramesh Sood said...

So much soothing, Harshadji.. beautiful.. loved it..Thank you..

ZEAL said...

keep smiling !

Harshad mehta said...

@ zeal : Thank you. You made me smile.

Sweetest in the Gale said...

The stars are a beautiful reminder, aren't they? Loved your poem!

spiritsoflena said...

simple and lovely

Rene/ Not The Rockefellers said...

He likes when you notice :)

Harshad mehta said...

@ Rene : Yes, He is always there for us, wanting to play with us.

Sandra.if said...

look up and smile...I understand...:)

gautami tripathy said...

Liked this...

an ode

And do get aboard the Poetry Train every Monday
mornings and thereafter!

Amity said...

I wonder why stars have that beautiful grace...maybe God created them to be so!

LOvely take Harshad!

Geraldine said...

Nice work with this lovely prompt. I enjoyed reading your work.

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Jingle said...

that's lovely grace.

Sumit Sarkar said...

Amazing...His Grace is always upon us...

Patti said...

so very nicley written- I love the line "busy with petty games" oh how true is that!