Monday, May 23, 2011

One Single Impression : Rambling


This and that
Here and there
I, me,
If, what not, but……
On and on…….

Efforts
Efforts
Efforts

to make the presence felt.

Point is
There is no point.

Got the point?

--
OSI Prompt : Rambling

8 comments:

PremI said...

got it!
Well done.

ms pie said...

oh yeah, there is so much more than that!!!

Anonymous said...

Oh I love this. What a fun play on words.

shail said...

Yeah, got it superbly! :)

Jyoti Mishra said...

Short but sweet !!

Jingle said...

what fun word play.
love the flow.
:)

RM said...

Yes... how strange we still spend so much time trying to make a point when the essence is lost.... we try to ascertain the species of a flower and it wilts by the time we have decided.... we argue on who ignored whom by what actions and ignore love completely in the process... so many such things we do... it is but the process of trying to live as we want, with our point driven home... But when do we really live ?

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

Wonderfully circular. :)