Monday, December 31, 2012

Moving on


 Watching world same way
Life a repetitions
Moving in circle

Looking within cleaned
Mist on Eyes
Granting new vision

Now seeing better
I move on
Not stuck anywhere

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OSI Prompt : Watching
Haiku Heights Prompt : New

5 comments:

Green Speck said...

A wonderful way to put it. Happy New Year Sir :-)

Carol L McKenna said...

Love the concept this poetry evokes ~ round and round and then 'moving on' ~ Happy New Year ^_^

(A Creative Harbor aka ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^)

SandyCarlson said...

Oh, for that movement!

The Write Girl said...

Clear vision gives you the clarity to move forward. A wonderful poem and Happy New Year!!

Meenakshi Malhotra said...

clarity of vision and thoughts! I loved this idea.

A very happy new year to you!