Harshadji, I am having goose-pumps.. know why.. I wanted to put another haiku for Betrayal..thought I should write on Moon... and came the lines..
Moon doesn't betray, It is the Cover of clouds That makes me wonder..
And I logged in to write.. and on my dash board.. saw your entry and that stopped me in my tracks.. this is indeed a great coincident... are we learning similar lessons..God knows..well .. thanks for the haiku...
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Harshadji, I am having goose-pumps.. know why.. I wanted to put another haiku for Betrayal..thought I should write on Moon... and came the lines..
Moon doesn't betray,
It is the Cover of clouds
That makes me wonder..
And I logged in to write.. and on my dash board.. saw your entry and that stopped me in my tracks.. this is indeed a great coincident... are we learning similar lessons..God knows..well .. thanks for the haiku...
A lovely Haiku on getting wiser Harshadji!! Lessons are learnt over a time!!
lovely words...beautifully crafted lines!
Nice piece of writing.
we shared the same subject, the moon...
like this perspective...very nice~
An interesting one.
can the moon betray...?
Very imaginative lines indeed
The clouds covering the moon can play tricks on the mind.
Well recorded!
how smart.
:)
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