Sunday, September 25, 2011

Amusing


Amusing

He made faces,
Jumped, rolled, mimicked
Yet failed to amuse
Till he looked in her eyes 
....and asked
What can I do to make you laugh?

….And she laughed and laughed….

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No amount of doing helps without being


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OSI Prompt : Amuse


18 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

Yes, it happens with us so many times.. Harshadji what a capture of the moments..loved it..

Anonymous said...

deep understanding there!!

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...

That's surely amazing moments.

amused by your take.

Jyoti Mishra said...

Intense n deep !!

Geraldine said...

Your last line says it all. good work Harshad!

Almas Kiran Shamim said...

yeaahh!!! it happens;;
you have captured such a lovely moment in your words.... :) :) :)

*happy* :)

SandyCarlson said...

Delightfully done. A beautiful image created here.

mareymercy said...

Love this one!

shail said...

Sometimes when you stop making an effort you get results :) Nice one.

Anonymous said...

Very thought provoking and true! Describes that perfect moment in time when things just fall perfectly into place.

Patti said...

Love that! And the emotions people have sometimes come out at the most unexpected times and places, don't they?

Scarlet said...

Nice one.. now I am laughing too~

Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

lovely take.
your words are magical.

Susie Clevenger said...

Love this..my husband loves to say thinks he thinks are funny and watch my face for my lack of amusement...love this one!

Nanka said...

You have captured the essence wonderfully!! Made me laugh too!! Endearing moments and fantastic understanding!! Great poem and excellently done!!

Kremo said...

Wow, you really put life into that quote !

Lisa at Greenbow said...

An amusing ending to a desperate plea.

Anonymous said...

This is such a sweet poem, and very
real.