Amusing
He made faces,
Jumped, rolled, mimicked
Yet failed to amuse
Till he looked in her eyes
....and asked
What can I do to make you laugh?
….And she laughed and laughed….
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No amount of doing helps without being
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OSI Prompt : Amuse
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OSI Prompt : Amuse
18 comments:
Yes, it happens with us so many times.. Harshadji what a capture of the moments..loved it..
deep understanding there!!
That's surely amazing moments.
amused by your take.
Intense n deep !!
Your last line says it all. good work Harshad!
yeaahh!!! it happens;;
you have captured such a lovely moment in your words.... :) :) :)
*happy* :)
Delightfully done. A beautiful image created here.
Love this one!
Sometimes when you stop making an effort you get results :) Nice one.
Very thought provoking and true! Describes that perfect moment in time when things just fall perfectly into place.
Love that! And the emotions people have sometimes come out at the most unexpected times and places, don't they?
Nice one.. now I am laughing too~
lovely take.
your words are magical.
Love this..my husband loves to say thinks he thinks are funny and watch my face for my lack of amusement...love this one!
You have captured the essence wonderfully!! Made me laugh too!! Endearing moments and fantastic understanding!! Great poem and excellently done!!
Wow, you really put life into that quote !
An amusing ending to a desperate plea.
This is such a sweet poem, and very
real.
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