Betrayal ?
Love is like a
Fresh breeze refreshing mind,
Blossoming flowers filling heart with splendor,
Shower of rain cooling soul,
When it is there
feel blessed
Enjoy it.
When
Breeze pass
Rain go and
Flowers fall
Can I complain?
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OSI Prompt : Betrayal
14 comments:
just loved the last verse !!
Beauteous..
Nice read.
You have put it so well! Indeed, a beautiful expression here..what a way to handle perceived betrayal..Thanks Harshadji, your wisdom sprinkles..all over..
Enjoy love as it is a blessing ~
Different way on looking at betrayal ~
Both poems are full of wisdom and
read and flow so well.
Yes, seize the day and never regret it!
We celebrate love and when it leaves we lament...forgetting the joy we experienced when it was there..I enjoyed reading your take on the word betrayal.
Interesting. It's a shame love is a passing thing.
Beautifully said. So thoughtful and so true.
You can't hide your feeling when love is ruling.
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loved it.
Graceful and serene - beautifully composed.
no complaints.
lovely nature imagery.
Very lovely! Ah yes- enjoy love when it is there...wise words for sure! Off to read your second poem!
It has been said that it is better to have loved and lost than to never have known true love.
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