LOVE
Like a fresh breeze,
Coming without any notice
and stoping without any,
It blossoms on its own.
With love around,
Celebration is on.
Heart gets wings and
Soul is content,
Sunrise and sunsets are more colourful,
Moon more charming
And fragrance in air enchanting.
It is His grace that visits you
No one has control over it.
When in love you trust totally
So tender……
Efforts to retain it are like holding back
Cool breeze that lift your spirits.
*
Lasting are
Marriages
Contracts
Relationships
Understandings……
Right efforts can keep it going
…..With cool breeze refreshing your heart often,
If you are
Open and Lucky.
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OSI Prompt : LOVE.
20 comments:
A perfect poem Harshad, I really enjoyed this one and the lovely prompt too, thank you!
To be open and lucky - two of the secrets of love :)
Well said!
Beautiful...
Love flowing like a cool breeze, in your words.
Truly,Love is His grace...so fresh and effortless.
"When in love you trust totally"
Very well said.
Loved the poem.
no one has control over it....love that !!
Somehow.. the line...right efforts keep it going...left me thinking.. God bless!!!
Lucky in love is a classical theme, Harshad. I like the way you included the elements of our world.
Being open helps for sure. That and the help of God.
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It is beautifully written Harshad and a wonderful prompt for MOther's Day.
Ah, to be open. To feel that breeze. Than many wonderful things are possible.
Very nice. I like the last stanza especially.
I found these words to be most touching, "With love around, Celebration is on. Heart gets wings and Soul is content,Sunrise and sunsets are more colourful,Moon more charmingAnd fragrance in air enchanting."
This is what true love can do.
Beautifully written, Harshad.
Thanks for this week's prompt.
(It was nice to see you over at my blog)
I particularly appreciate the reference to Grace. It enters when we allow, doesn't it? What a blessing.
blossom on its own?
wow.
well done.
love the way you nail it.
Right effort....I like that. Thank you for reminding us that it takes a little effort too!
Beautiful poem...thank you for the inspiration this week. Love is a beautiful concept to write about.
Wonderful thoughts on love ... beautiful.
peace,
jp/deborah
Beautifully written for your prompt!! Thank you!
Lovely poem! A simple and beautiful prompt! :)
wonderful flow of words. glad to have found your blog :)
it soothed my heart...loved it!!
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http://bluestocking-bird.blogspot.com/
regards
saumya
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