Passions…. pain & pleasure
Want to win, control, gain…..
Ego rules,
Passions run high
Reasons are subordinated.
Reasons followed as fear looms
Pain persists.
When her conscious turned to giving,
Passions take different shape.
Creativity and enthusiasm.
Heart sings.
Passionate about her work,
Joy and love flows.
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OSI Prompt : Passionate
19 comments:
Wonderful contrasting passions and its consequences!!
It is beautiful.. one can be passionate..in whatever way.. with expected results.. well done.. Harshadji..so beautifully brought out an intense truth.. a shift can shift everything..
deep message in the rhythmical undertone of this writeup. It is true if we leave the ego behind and just concentrate on our work we do better.
Your second verse corresponds with my attitude.
passion with a love poem, nice
passion everywhere...so nice!
Polar attitudes. Love the post
yes,very true.Governed by ego,even Passion is a cause of pain & misery...
In Love,is always Joy & Fulfillment...
What a wonderful, felt reflection of life itself.
Please have a good start into the new week.
daily athens
beautiful... letting go opens all kinds of doors...
two wonderfully different looks at passion.
Beautiful contrast. Beautiful poems.
I enjoyed your verse.
Wonderfully put. Both sides of the picture. Sometimes we are on one side, sometimes on the other...
So beautifully written. Love the contrast.
Passion will always be part of our human frailty and I so much like your rendition here...:)
Well said dear! :)
Ahhh...the shift and how everything changes. Great work with this prompt!
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I really like them both and can relate to them both as well! Interesting how passion can take such different forms, isn't it?
Really nice perspective. We need a bit more of this in the world today!
Here's mine:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2010/07/29/chocolate-erotic/
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