I wanted her.
I tried very hard to get her,
She was always in my mind,
She was always in my heart,
But she kept eluding me.
One morning I got up,
And got involved with my work,
I forgot her,
Working hard with all my heart
While I was busy working,
Someone knocked my door,
It was she! His grace bestowed.
Success is her name.
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OSI Promt:Try
12 comments:
oops..... i was reading, reading...and lastly was surprised by her name....
awesome peace sir ji....
Success does eventually come when you have tried hard. May be delayed but surely there. Great words in this poem so beautifully etched!!
lovely one :D
reminded me of the 3 idiots dialogue though :D
and yes indeed wen u work hard success will have to follow you :D
the fruit of hard work is success...:)
perfectly written Harshad!
It eventually gets to us!
bring on the cawing
Wonderful take on the prompt! =)
-Weasel
loved that! SO true- things happen when we take out mind off of them, don't they?
Yes, you have yourself answered.. you stopped trying.. and it happened..and that is what really happens.. only if we learn to stop trying harder..
How very rare indeed, that success knocks on ones door - an outstanding take upon this prompt.
Please have a good new week.
daily athens
that was a awesome surprise, success knocks your door only when you have worked hard for it.. lovely poem.
you have captured the essence...prepare and then let go.
you have captured the essence of trying...prepare and then let go!
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