Monday, October 11, 2010

Crazy craving


Since ages....

My relentless efforts 
To merge with you
Is on.....




We meet,
We are together
We embrace,
Yet never one.
You remain you.
Stubborn.  Hard.
And I have to retreat.





Yet that crazy craving to be one with you
Makes me try again and again
Again and again……

…..Someday you will give in
And……. it will be all over.

No wanting
No desire
No craving
No loneliness.
-
OSI Prompt : Lonely

10 comments:

Anonymous said...

nicely written....
keep blessing us with ur precious words...
मेरे ब्लॉग पर इस बार
एक और आईडिया....

Amity said...

but will that someday come?

lovely metaphor Harshad! so very well said!

Nanka said...

Beautiful lines in the poem "Makes me try again and againAgain and again……
…..Someday you will give inAnd……" Lonesome erosion so well said,greatly loved it.

The Write Girl said...

Inspirational, beautiful, and passionate. Love the imagery. Wonderful poetry!

Reflections said...

Nice take, love the metaphor of loneliness eroding at your being like the sea does the shore.

Beyond Few Words said...

that's an excellent way in which you connect nature with life.. your few words convey an epic. Wonderful.

haisley said...

yeah!I also want to know if...there is someday.... nice my friend

Jeeves said...

Nice one

Jingle said...

yopur words carry me away.

Jingle said...

Welcome To link in a poem to our potluck today, thanks a ton!
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-seven-deadly-sins.html

you could use an old poem,
hurry up.