Sunday, October 3, 2010

A different approach


Trying life

Tired me

Till I stopped trying


Now I am a relaxed witness.
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OSI Promt: Try

11 comments:

ZEAL said...

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Great lines !

That's how our lives are .

After the evolution of life. I am in the process of evolution.

What we see and hear quite often is too fake and masked.

Quesnch to explore truth has taken back seat now. 'cause there is nothing like truth.

Everything is so momentary.

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haisley said...

Hi!!! Nicely written

Nanka said...

Ha! ha! ha! Looks like this is in reply to my Haiku :D Who does not want to feel relaxed :p

Usha Pisharody said...

That 's a good approach! And this reads almost haiku like!
Me likes. Very much!

Anonymous said...

aww sweet..
dont get tired so soon..
try n try and u will succeeed..
hard work def pays :D

Amity said...

Succinct!

Yes, Harshad, if we keep on trying though nothing seems to come through, why not relax? It will surely be better, isn't it?

I like this rendition, very few words but so deep in meaning!

Patti said...

Oh- I really liked that- and such true words too

Ramesh Sood said...

Yes, this is a better approach.. because when you relax.. things begin to happen on their own.. I have experienced this.. but then I continue to keep trying.. keep persisiting.. Thanks.. you really think very deep..

Anonymous said...

A deep bow in respect.

Please have a good new week.

daily athens

SandyCarlson said...

"Trying life" has a nice double edge to it. Life can be that way, and we can try life. And then we can try it. Three meanings. I can appreciate watching.

PS Your prompt, lonely, is up next week. Please send me what you want on the OSI home page by Friday.)

Harshad Mehta said...

@ Sandy : So beautiful.

I think 'try' you mentioned is try of a witness. She is playing. She enjoys the game of life.

PS: Thanks for reminding about my turn on prompt.