It is difficult….
…..but I will ‘try’ said she.
What she meant was,
If it is done, ‘I’ have done it
If fails, it was difficult in any case.
‘Try’ is tricky
Diplomatic,
Sitting on the fence-
Head I win, tail you lose.
Non- committing
Half hearted, at the best.
Instead,
“just do it”
takes long way.
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OSI Prompt : Try
8 comments:
life happens when we move from sitting on the fence to just doing it ...
excellent!
A whole life indeed fits into these lines. Great piece indeed. And it seems as if trying will have success at last, as indeed we continue to breath.
Please have a good new week.
daily athens
So know the feeling. At the moment, the prospect of commitment is doing me in. I guess maybe means no.
very well written sir ji...
fantabulous...
मेरे ब्लॉग पर इस बार ....
क्या बांटना चाहेंगे हमसे आपकी रचनायें...
अपनी टिप्पणी ज़रूर दें...
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Yes loved the idea...
You do not progress by sitting on the fence indeed, but a 'try' can give you the experience.
Lovely words.
Your last stanza, it does indeed! Good workd with the prompt.
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Whole hearted commitment is what makes life rich and meaningful
effectively written--the contrast between dipping your toes in and full immersion!
Harshad ji you said it.. just do it. and move on.. and in any case everyone moves on in to a new day.. so why not move on doing some thing.. liked it.. thanks..
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