Since ages....
My relentless efforts
To merge with you
Is on.....
We meet,
We are together
We embrace,
Yet never one.
You remain you.
Stubborn. Hard.
And I have to retreat.
Yet that crazy craving to be one with you
Makes me try again and again
Again and again……
…..Someday you will give in
And……. it will be all over.
No wanting
No desire
No craving
No loneliness.
-
OSI Prompt : Lonely
9 comments:
nicely written....
keep blessing us with ur precious words...
मेरे ब्लॉग पर इस बार
एक और आईडिया....
but will that someday come?
lovely metaphor Harshad! so very well said!
Beautiful lines in the poem "Makes me try again and againAgain and again……
…..Someday you will give inAnd……" Lonesome erosion so well said,greatly loved it.
Inspirational, beautiful, and passionate. Love the imagery. Wonderful poetry!
Nice take, love the metaphor of loneliness eroding at your being like the sea does the shore.
that's an excellent way in which you connect nature with life.. your few words convey an epic. Wonderful.
yeah!I also want to know if...there is someday.... nice my friend
yopur words carry me away.
Welcome To link in a poem to our potluck today, thanks a ton!
http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-seven-deadly-sins.html
you could use an old poem,
hurry up.
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