Sunday, October 31, 2010

Blessed Moments


Blessed Moments.
(OSI Prompt: Fancy)


I FANCY
Those few moments
When I ceased being me,
Dissolved
To
Be one with you.





I found real me then,
For those few moments….

-

14 comments:

Koo said...

Beautiful!

eyeography said...

Lovely...
Good use of the prompt... :)

Ramesh Sood said...

Excelllent!

Harshadji..freedom..that's what matters truly..

And I broke my thick attachment with a place and people after 28 years a few days ago..yes,

Samir said...

Very interesting piece with sketch.

Flower to represent loving tenderness and tail to represent strength of Bull??

Good lines.

Pam said...

This is so simple in words and structure, yet so beautiful. Thank you.

Sherri B. said...

So lovely...and your sketch was powerful in its simplicity.

Teresa said...

What a wonderful sentiment!

Anonymous said...

How impressive a piece ! Currently on the "run" towards me, surely moved me. Please have a good new month, week as well.

daily athens

SandyCarlson said...

The erotic beauty of contingency, right here in this poem.

Thank you.

Reflections said...

Touching words of one love.

Beyond said...

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Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

lovely fancy.

Anonymous said...

Very nice!
Thanks for stopping by my blog. It was nice to come and see yours.

Patti said...

Both- wonderful. So true about the first one especially- oh what lies behind those smiles and happy moments...