Excellence
Humming, singing
Spinning wheel
Creating earthen pots
That earns her enough
For her to call it good.
She felt calm, content.
Love spilling to show
On the pots she made.
“Excellent. These are best in town,
Strong & well shaped”
Said a customer to another
Visiting her hut.
Smile passed her face.
Where is the beginning
of
Excellence?
OSI Promt : Beginning
16 comments:
Awesome Harshadji.. your thoughts are taking a totally different dimension..so very deep and picking up beautiful experiences on the way..like it a lot..what a beginning..this!
Wonderful poem. I wonder where excellence begins--and find it in your poem!
Awesome work! The beginning of excellence, it's up to each of us to find it. Great piece!
-Weasel
Excellence begins with creation, be it pottery or our poetry!
red sand
Excellence begins in a heart that is full - content. It then shows out in whatever is done by her.
Awestruckkkkkkk with words.
i like how u end the poem, Harshadji.. it leaves food for thought.. i find excellence in ur poem.. wonderful..
that was original!
Source or beginning of quality or excellence is inside. It resides in you. It shows out in work where you put your heart.
Excellent piece!
The beginning of excellence is inside.... deep inside...
beginning of excellence? it is when one appreciates and loves what she's doing... :)
Nice really!
wonderful harshad sir...
perfectly written....
Amazing words, in my opinion, to seek excellence, one must first seek failure then you will know where you make mistakes and learn from them, we are not made perfectly and only to keep moving on ahead of ourselves then can we truly find excellence.
wonderful Harshadbhai...u r 2 gd..
Hi
A nice poem
Very true. Excellence often begins as a dirty, exhausting thing. Only much later is it beautiful and noticed.
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