Destination (OSI Prompt : Roads)
Roads are never ending
Take round and round,
Lives pass travelling
Yet not reach.
Destination eludes.
Till one finds a road
That lead to lots of love,
To Him.
Image from : http://pixdaus.com/single.php?id=56412
onesingleimpression Prompt : Roads
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21 comments:
yes indeed...road that leads to him
very well said
A delightful, reflective response!
So true. Until right path is found, one doesn't reach nowhere.
Finding that road can be hard work. Thank you for this prompt.
This is so beautifullly put..I loved the ending as it's HIM there..
OSI says the prompt is from you..and the side bar gives name of Ms. Gautami..well some misunderstanding.. thanks anyway..I enjoyed writing for the prompt this week..
I read it at One Single Impression which has the added words, "click here" - but I get the point
we all have our own roads to travel but its destination is almost always unknown
simple and sweet :)
A wonderfully written poem! It's always nice to find someone at the edge of the road. Great post!
-Weasel
It is the best road to tread...that which leads us to Him...
nicely done Harshad!
ah the road to love, that is a good road.
love the combination of image and words.
peace,
JP/deb
Yes, the destination eludes...always within sight but never being able to quite get there...
Always on that road - nice!
@Ramesh Sood : No, this is not my prompt. Some confusion. I emailed OSI on reading your comment. I think now it stands corrected.
Beautifully done. Quite enjoyed reading it.
manzil sey zyada kaarwaan maaynaa rakhta hai...:-)
Very well said! :)
All of us look for our right path, and hopefully we all shld find em! :)
There's a message for ya'al on my blog.: )
Dear Harshad,
Good Evening!
Each one of us like to tread upon a path that leads to love and peace!
Very well expressed thought!
Wishing you a lovely evening,
Sasneham,
Anupama
beautiful...
roads to travel by...
The ending was a surprise for me and I like it! Very nice.
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