Saturday, July 3, 2010

Deastination

Destination   (OSI Prompt : Roads)

Roads are never ending
Take round and round,
Lives pass travelling
Yet not reach.
Destination eludes.





Till one finds a road
That lead to lots of love,
To Him.

  




 onesingleimpression Prompt : Roads
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21 comments:

Jeeves said...

yes indeed...road that leads to him

Beyond said...

very well said

Gemma Wiseman said...

A delightful, reflective response!

Samir said...

So true. Until right path is found, one doesn't reach nowhere.

SandyCarlson said...

Finding that road can be hard work. Thank you for this prompt.

Ramesh Sood said...

This is so beautifullly put..I loved the ending as it's HIM there..

OSI says the prompt is from you..and the side bar gives name of Ms. Gautami..well some misunderstanding.. thanks anyway..I enjoyed writing for the prompt this week..

lissa said...

I read it at One Single Impression which has the added words, "click here" - but I get the point

we all have our own roads to travel but its destination is almost always unknown

Anonymous said...

simple and sweet :)

Weasel said...

A wonderfully written poem! It's always nice to find someone at the edge of the road. Great post!

-Weasel

Amity said...

It is the best road to tread...that which leads us to Him...

nicely done Harshad!

Tammie Lee said...

ah the road to love, that is a good road.

JP/deb said...

love the combination of image and words.

peace,
JP/deb

Patti said...

Yes, the destination eludes...always within sight but never being able to quite get there...

Tumblewords: said...

Always on that road - nice!

Harshad Mehta said...

@Ramesh Sood : No, this is not my prompt. Some confusion. I emailed OSI on reading your comment. I think now it stands corrected.

aayanman said...

Beautifully done. Quite enjoyed reading it.

divya said...

manzil sey zyada kaarwaan maaynaa rakhta hai...:-)

Sonshu said...

Very well said! :)

All of us look for our right path, and hopefully we all shld find em! :)

There's a message for ya'al on my blog.: )

anupama said...

Dear Harshad,
Good Evening!
Each one of us like to tread upon a path that leads to love and peace!
Very well expressed thought!
Wishing you a lovely evening,
Sasneham,
Anupama

The Enchantress said...

beautiful...

roads to travel by...

Kathie Brown said...

The ending was a surprise for me and I like it! Very nice.