Tonight,
It is stormy and pouring heavily
Whole sky is melting on my little hut within.
Noise of drops hitting hard on tin roof
Gets into me many times louder,
Deafening my senses.
I am vulnerable.
Scared …. I will be drowned in flooded drains.
I hold tightly on to the only pillar in my hut.
Tighter….tighter….
Noise gets louder….louder…
If I hold on till storm pass…..
If I can……
It will be a different world in the morning.
P.S. : following other titles came to my mind.
Which do you think is more appropriate?
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1) Only Piller
2)Tomorrow will be another day
3)Dreaded night
5 comments:
Only Pillar or
One Pillar....
" Tomorrow will be another day " is optimistic & forward looking. Gives hopes.
hold no... all storms pass.
are u ok?? Take care....
Hope it is a fiction..
Imagine how beautiful next day mrng will be! all washed and clean, green!
Clear and moist.
It will be calm!
Tomorrow will be another day seems the most important. It undercuts the trauma, which leads to the surprise when you read the entire poem.
So strong that your readers worry for your safety.
Beautiful and so alive.
Elaine J.M.
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