Sunday, September 9, 2012

Echo


Echo

Love receive in
Only love






Your being is enough







Everything else is returned
Name, title, claims….
Even sound,
As it violates

Be it ego
Be it echo
It repeats
till its death

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OSI Prompt : Echo                   

11 comments:

Green Speck said...

Wonderfully carved ... the last few lines still echoes in my ears !!!

anthonynorth said...

Beautifully deep.

totomai said...

oh, definitely, love is a cycle :-)

Ron. said...

Excellent, ethereal work, this. Salute.

Anonymous said...

beautiful thoughts!

joanne said...

hopefully, love is returned also.....very introspective

Sonshu said...

Its been a while since I came here but I must say that your writing is still just as brilliant.

I love the form. The words.


Everything.

Sonshu
www.thesonshu.com

Jim said...

A few memories from my life are still echoing. Most of them are pleasant happenings.
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Mr. Linky had the wrong URL for me earlier. This is where I am:
Jim's Little Photo and Poem Place
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Sri Valli said...

How true!..Deep thoughts and wonderful poetry!

Harshad mehta said...

@Joanne : I think much more than that, both merge! isn't it?

SandyCarlson said...

So it does! Well done.