Sunday, September 30, 2012

A call



A call

As usual, 
alone 
at regular place for evening walk

It is Twilight of evening
Cool breeze
Golden light

Couples strolling
Friends together talking, laughing, walking….

Birds chirping
I believe it is a call to return

So beautiful, I thought

My hand reaches for mobile
To call you

I want you to hear
Chirping

--
OSI Prompt: Absent

16 comments:

J Cosmo Newbery said...

The call to come home, the warm welcome. A call we all pine for. Nicely captured.

Jim said...

Life can get lonesome without one's mate.

Your poem reminded me of a song that was popular back when I was young:

The Birdies Sing :





























Let's all sing like the birdies sing,
Tweet, tweet tweet, tweet tweet.
Let's all sing like the birdies sing,
Sweet, sweet sweet, sweet sweet.
Let's all warble like nightingales,
Give your throat a treat.
Take you time from the birds,
Now you all know the words,
Tweet, tweet tweet, tweet tweet.
Let's all sing like the birdies sing,
Bubbaboo ba-bubbaboo ba-boo.
Let's all sing like the birdies sing,
Tweet tweet tweet - my that bird sings sweetly.
Let's all warble like nightingales,
Ah, Mimi...c'est magnifique!
Take your time from the birds,
Now you all know the words
Tweet, tweet tweet, tweet tweet
Let's all sing like the birdies sing,
Tweet, tweet tweet, tweet tweet.
Let's all sing like the birdies sing,
Sweet, sweet sweet, sweet sweet.
Let's all warble like nightingales,
Give your throat a treat.
Take your time from the birds,
Now you all know the words,
Tweet, tweet tweet, tweet tweet

..

anthonynorth said...

Ah, the desire to be homeward. great words.

Ramesh Sood said...

Very beautiful...refreshing... music to the mind ..as you look for more music to your ears..

Thanks Harshaji..

RS:)

Ron. said...

Chirps and Tweets. What a world.

Green Speck said...

Such a sweet poem ... At times like this you really feel like calling that special person :-)

The Write Girl said...

You weave such a beautiful scene with your poem. Nicely done!

SandyCarlson said...

What it is to want someone near to share. Beautifully done.

Laura said...

so sweet and tender.

odyzz said...

very sweet and loving..

I am here

http://odizzey.wordpress.com/2012/10/03/creativity-osi-sunday-scribblings/

Lady In Read said...

nicely done.. thank you

Green Speck said...

This is so beautiful ... loved it :-)

Carol L McKenna said...

Ah, know that feeling 'needing the human voice' ~ well penned ~

A Creative Harbor) aka ArtMuseDog and Carol ^_^

Lovely to have you 'visit'.

Loch Rob said...

In the moments of twilight, as I reflect on the day. There's a calm silence that comes within these thoughts. Walking hand in hand with the one I love, makes existence seem worth it all in the end. It makes me wish I had never seen or heard of the mobile. Too much noise to blot out the chirping birds. I guess I am a romantic in the end. Thanks for making me think on this a bit. Rob.

Maggie said...

So nice to want to share your lovely moment with one your love :))

VaNdAnA ShArMa said...

A VERY BEAUTIFUL AND RESONATING POEM.