Not happy with
Situation around
And thought
Let go,
Not holding on,
…..Keeping silent
Will bring about desired effects
It did not.
Keenness for silence to be effective,
Took away a
Part of that silence
….A part so vital
For silence to be effective
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OSI Prompt : Vital
6 comments:
thanks for a wonderful prompt this week Harshad and for your poem. So true...
I can't term it as beautiful, they are rather powerful words.. with a lot of depth and meaning. No poetry is worth a read if it has no message to convey. I have never found that short in your writings.
A great truth in this - and it flows so well, too.
Yes, sometimes speaking out is very vital. You wrote simple and effective words here.
Thank you for the nice prompt. It was fun to work with.
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powerful words indeed!!
That's a great poem and a great prompt. Thank you. Oh, for good silence.
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