Friday, February 24, 2012

Elements Lost


Beautiful fishes
Long and swift
Playing around sea plants
In deep within
So beautiful, mesmerizing

Sometimes Golden
Sometimes pink, blue…..
…..Different moods

Wanting to show them to you,
I try to shape them in words
Add sketch or photos
But at best is a very poor mock up

I still persist

Trying to bring those deep water beings
Into dry air
And present to you  
But
Dead fishes

Elements lost

Please see my limitations
And forgive me

--
OSI Prompt : Elemental

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

This is brilliant. There are no limitations. It is how it is supposed to be. It is brilliant.

Anonymous said...

the intention and difficulties to communicate...love this!!

SandyCarlson said...

You write beautiful and loving poetry.