One Single impression: Silence
On a garden bench
After morning walk,
Relaxed
I see…..
A quill floating in the air
Drifting slowly up
and down
A butterfly with green and red spots
Passes over my head
Then goes on to flower near,
A call of cuckoo
Soon answered by his mate,
Two friends on a bench next
Sharing a joke…laughing loudly
Cool morning air
Passing through my nostrils
Touching deep into my stomach
……….Making me
Lighter
Lighter…..
Floating with quill
Slowly up
And down……..
Flowing …….with flow
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OSI prompt: Silence
15 comments:
quiet ...lovely!
quiet ...lovely..!!
a tranquil poem...lovely ~
hmm... lovely!
Keep floating... cool and relaxed. :)
I got all relaxed just reading this beautiful poem.
I find your poem to be very peaceful I can picture my self in this garden. Nice read. Thank You
I find your poem to be very peaceful I can picture my self in this garden. Nice read. Thank You
"lighter, lighter" how beautiful this was a thrill to read!
Beautiful verse...
dead woman returns
Nice poem & refreshing imagery.
I felt my breath matching the rhythm of this poem-- so quiet and peaceful.
I love this! How often I feel this way also, escaping into the atmosphere around me. Nicely done.
So tranquil and beautiful. I would love to be in that scene.
I LOVE moments like that! You captured it well- silence is a wonderful thing~~~
loved the serene imagery, this piece manages to create :)
beautiful!!!
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