Out casted
(One single Impression - Prompt : Oubliette)
They all left
Never to look back,
Leaving him alone..
Out casted.
He
Restless.. ..lonely….cursing…..suffering….
Confined to himself,
In oubliette.
Nights darker & longer,
& tears heavier.
Gradually….
Reality sinks in.
He is calmer….
Silent…..
Having passed through those dark nights
now
He rejoices in twilight of space within.
He no more curses
He no more curses
He has empathy for them….
For all.
He is no more alone.
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17 comments:
Wow! Harshadji, you have your unique way of taking on the prompt.. loved it..and that's the essence of life..INNER SPACE.. and you have truly created it so beautifully..
How beautifully put...your words are very wise, and what I strive for myself!
Wonderful Sir, the "twilight of the inner space" !!!
Very nice Harshad...
'that inner struggle and after some tears, loneliness, solitude...' you have overcome that oubliette-like situation...call it a willingness to survive...
been into it, did this, done that...but thank God am fine...:)
thanks for your constant visit in my place...:)
Thank you for your comment. I can relate to your 'outcasted' poem having had my apparently wicked poem removed from this site.
Should I oubliette myself?:)
I am not anonymous. My name is Rallentanda.
Beautifully put into words!
Pamela
There is always that hope. Nicely done.
you in your communication are expressing thoughts.. which leaves me wondering at times. wonderful thought "Having passed through those dark nightsnowHe rejoices in twilight of space within.
He no more cursesHe has empathy for them….
For all.
He is no more alone."
Very sensitive,beautiful flow of emotions.
Within is the power to........
Very well expressed. Loved it.
God bless you.
You expressed a progression of feelings here very well. From dispair to hope and/or calmness.
I also like the way you incorporate your blog name into the poems. That is limiting, though, right?
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Harshad, I'm liking your progression here. From absolute destitution to a calm acceptance.
When he remembers who he is and what he is capable of the true person comes from within to rescue his mind. Not his body, no rescue there. It may rot in darkness in that dismal place.
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superb
Beautiful!! :)
i loved it!
Very sensitive.....!!
There are ways out of that isolation, to be sure.
wow that is beautiful!!
great going..
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