Saturday, October 13, 2012

celebration




Each heartbeat
Each breath
One with the whole

Nothing special has to happen
Nothing else wanted

Each moment,
Linked with another
Yet complete and
Free

Free
To Love
To create
To share

--
OSI Prompt : Free

9 comments:

Green Speck said...

Soft and subtle ... loved the emotions in this piece !!!

SandyCarlson said...

This is a beautiful reflection on what it is to be free.

Geraldine said...

Beautifully said. Thanks for a wonderful prompt this week.

http://mypoeticpath.wordpress.com/2012/10/12/haiku-reflections-breathing-free/

Anonymous said...

subtle positive words...well said Harshad...:)

Robyn Greenhouse said...

Beautiful poem - loved the ending.

anthonynorth said...

That's what I call freedom.

Jim said...

I like your poem, Harshad ~~ Love the heartbeat and the breath counted, each one special, separately. Being free is wonderful but we take it for granted all too often.

Thank you for this nice prompt, it was a fun write.
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Ramesh Sood said...

Free to love, to create, to share...

And so many feel free to take, take and take..

I liked Harshadji the way you put it.

RS:)

my heart's love songs said...

really lovely!