Space Within: Please take over........

Sunday, June 26, 2011

Please take over........

Please Take Over ….

Demolished and dissolved

Ego, flow out with tears…

As i pray.

Now clean

Mind, able to see

Sins committed,

Heart silently prays

Please take over…….

-

OSI Prompt :Seven Sins

13 comments:

Anonymous said...: love it,
powerful.; June 26, 2011 at 8:37 AM
Beyond said...: love it; June 26, 2011 at 9:37 AM
Jim said...: Nicely written, Harshad! I can feel the feeling your poet feels.
At the bottom, humble, remorseful, repentent, submissive.
..; June 26, 2011 at 10:41 AM
PremI said...: silence felt...
nice...; June 26, 2011 at 11:19 AM
Vinay Leo R. said...: I like the thought, of ego flowing out with the tears..! Powerful and well written. I like it a lot, Harshadji.; June 26, 2011 at 1:31 PM
Harshad Mehta said...: @Jim I think poet is awakening to realities.

Ones who are humble are not at the bottom, in fact ones who are assertive are ones who are at the bottom.; June 26, 2011 at 2:28 PM
Linda Jacobs said...: Love the simplicity of this plea!; June 26, 2011 at 8:36 PM
sgreerpitt said...: "disolved ego," "clean mind" -- good goals.; June 26, 2011 at 8:55 PM
Anonymous said...: I like those human humble feelings...!; June 26, 2011 at 9:50 PM
Anonymous said...: Wonderful evocative words.; June 26, 2011 at 11:17 PM
Unknown said...: I feel the faith in this piece.
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/06/26/seven-steps-to-gehenna/; June 27, 2011 at 12:35 AM
Amity said...: If only we could always let the good thoughts rain in our hearts?

Short but powerful Harshad!; June 30, 2011 at 12:22 PM
Patti said...: beautiful- we all need that healing after...; June 30, 2011 at 6:00 PM

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