( ( ( ((( E c h o e s ))) ) ) )
Whisper so low,
Almost feeling and not voice.
Always playing
As if continuous echoes
Of flowing stream in a valley,
Heard clearly
In my silent moments,
Guiding me to walk
Path that lead to
Space Within.
……Many times not in the direction
That logically led to
Actions
Excitement
And immediate success.
--
OSI Prompt: Echoes
14 comments:
Good morning, Harshadji.. and the path leads to Space Within in the direction of peace, joy and tranquility.. what else can one pray for.. Its always a pleasure to visit SPACE WITHIN.. Thanks for the wisdom..
Wonderful poetry.. a feel of the tranquil; expresses a lot in a mere few words.. a great read..
Beautiful... the thought of a gentle guiding voice that walks you to that space within.
In the silence of your walk within your space, there must be so much serenity, and your own little celebration!
Very well done. Thanks for sharing.
your words are subtle and beautiful!!
I think I was confused about your remark...now I think you refer to the content...:)
Terrific Space Within Harshad...and you created a beautiful echo in here, worthy of expressing your innate talent!
Loved the echoes of your words>....
thanks so much for your words...closing may have a meaning you are right!!
Love that line "almost feeling and not voice". Very beautiful.
So very true- I feel the echoes may eventually lead there though but not always when we want
ah beautiful :). We all need to be in touch with our spaces within :-)
a nice serene take on echoes.
vivid demonstration of echoes.
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