Thursday, May 6, 2010

Just some rest....

Just some rest...


I want some rest
Away from you
Away from my own self….

Away from all
That is “mine”
And that is “yours”


…just some rest


May be when I return
Forgotten word “Ours”
Will again find its place in dictionary.

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8 comments:

Ramesh Sood said...

I am happy to be the first to reach such wonderful poem.. what a fantastic message.. I remebered what Kahlil Gibran said in the Prophet - "Let there be spaces in your togetherness." Here's wishing you continue to spread wisdom for years to come..Thanks Harshad Ji!

Beyond said...

'our' not my or your. Yes I have been missing that word from quite a long.

Sudarshan said...

'our' changes context.

Anonymous said...

Our is not just your + mine.
It is your x mine.

Togetherness multiplies.

Sonshu said...

Ah lovely, we all tend to always use my or yours cuz we never really, oh well we're all selfish, we dont really realize, the "our" makes us stronger! :)

SandyCarlson said...

That would be a nice thing. Sometimes Our is a difficult struggle. Thanks for putting words on it.

Harshad Mehta said...

Thank you all for encouraging comments. :-)

Unknown said...

Nicely put