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A prisoner
In jail since long
World outside… a dream
He enjoys dreams.
A Jailor
Free…
Wants to climb mountains and cross rivers….
Have to report every morning on duty
…Till late in evening
Mountains & rivers are dreams he often talks about
To the prisoner
Prisoner wishes the jailor
Good morning
With smile
Every morning.
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20 comments:
An emotion so wonderfully conveyed.
My goodness, Harshadji this releases my spirit..well done, what a thought..
very well written sir....
keep writing...
please visit my blog for my new poem....
regards....
Very well written! :)
Both r prisoners. in fact jailor is more so.
So am I....
Thank u for your post.
There's a clever irony to this. Enjoyed it.
Oh, this was wonderful...we are all prisoners in some form. You expressed this beautifully!
Always a prisoner. Good post!
Sometimes the jailer is the beloved. Sadly.
Very nice post.
that was well expressed.
We all want to break free..but tied by an invisible chain.
Ah, yes. How each one has his own dreams and how sometimes life can be such a paradox.
Aren't we all prisoners and jailers at the same time?
Just a thought..
Tentacles
wonderfull...what an observation..
You have me thinking of the Big Read in the US--A Lesson Before Dying by Ernest Gaines.
Nice poem.
Both the jailer and prisoner are captives. The only freedom is in the surf!Long live surfing!
Harshad,
I have read all your poems and they are beautiful.
I am still not able to get the hang of posting comments.
Regards and Keep Poeming!
--- Pooja
nice poem
n its again a mind set of being a jailer or a prisoner
joyahaa
Thanks for your visit.. putting here what I wrote there for you..
Harshadji, I will request you to go thro my first entry... Soul's Journey Back Home.. I will like your feedback on that.. as I am personally convinced about waht I wrote..because it just happened exactly the way it is written.. hope you will do that..
Thank you all. Your comments matter a lot.
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